It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. What are causes ? and what will be effects on society ?
Some people argue that some countries lack students who are interested in science subject. This is because of the individuals and the problem of that countries. Therefore, society will have to suffer from heavily influenced.
There are several reasons for this problem. The first reason is that in some countries, especially is in developing countries, people have little access to computers or technology. They always have to learn from the theories of books without practicing in reality. If they had a choice to observe and do research everyday after receiving a lecture from the class, they would be more interested in science subject. Futhermore, some students think that science is a difficult subject and they don’t have any interested in science. This is why these students don’t focus on the lecture and fall behind with their studies. Therefore, they don’t choose to learn science subject.
There is one effect on the society. This is the less students choose to study science, the less scientists who society will have in the future. As a result, the science of the country will have a dramatical decrease, which leads to the reduction in the development of the country. Also our lives will be declined because there are no new inventions, research or experiments. For example, in Arfica, they don’t have so many scientists that lead to the undevelopment and their life are much harder than others.
In conclusion, the reason for countries don’t have enough students choosing science subject is from their opinion and their countries. this leads to the heavily effect on the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22519083969 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75270234495 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484732824427 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2554374874 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5294117647 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248387697102 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809272311882 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630171934568 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173945052925 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343273538653 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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