You have recently started attending hobby classes in your city. Your mother in your hometown wants to know about it. Write a letter to your mother. In the letter, mention: • What class are you taking? • How do you like it? • How long will you take the classes?
Dear Mummy,
I am really excited to tell you that I have recently joined cookery classes. You always wanted me to learn cooking as most of the time I stay away from my hometown due to work. In the classes, they age going to teach me preparation of thai , chinese and continental food.
To be honest , I am enjoying it very much. Cooking fresh food is far better than the processed food. You can add more vegetables and fruits in your diet by making it yourself. Not only it makes you independent , but it also leads to healthier life style.
The duration of classes is two months. I will surely prepare different types of recipe for you , next time I will come to Delhi .
Please write me back , I am eagerly waiting for response.
Warm Regards
Kanwal Kohli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
... classes. You always wanted me to learn cooking as most of the time I stay away from my...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ge going to teach me preparation of thai , chinese and continental food. To b...
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Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and continental food. To be honest , I am enjoying it very much. Cooking fre...
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Line 6, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rself. Not only it makes you independent , but it also leads to healthier life sty...
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Line 8, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...repare different types of recipe for you , next time I will come to Delhi . Ple...
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Line 8, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...for you , next time I will come to Delhi . Please write me back , I am eagerly ...
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Line 10, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... come to Delhi . Please write me back , I am eagerly waiting for response. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 641.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 138.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64492753623 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38548489713 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.746376811594 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 290.88556701 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.059842748 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.2727272727 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5454545455 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204686193283 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629571091071 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602599575423 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103829014885 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480443620166 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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