in the united state employees typically work five days a week for eight hour each day.
Many employees want to work four days a week and are willing less salary. They believe by this offer employees can fell more rest, and as a result, they would make less costly errors also this this the unemployment rate will decrease, in addition they can spend more time with their family which cast doubt by the lecture and I will explore it in my following essay.
Firstly, the reading suggests that this offer employee can feel more comfortable, so they will make fewer costly errors, but the lecture adds that the company should spend more money to hire new workers and train them, also the office space should extend and more computers needed, in the result the lecture prove the errors.
Secondly, the article says that by this offers the unemployment rate will decrease, in contrast the lecture says that hiring new workers will be costly. The company expectation will increase and they need from their workers to do a five-day job in four days, so this was not correct.
Thirdly, employees want less salary and they want to spend more time with family, but the lecture talks that they will lose the advance career or lose the job, also the will not promote.
As a result, the offers from reading was cast doubt by the lecture with the above reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
...they would make less costly errors also this this the unemployment rate will decrease, in...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...rs. Secondly, the article says that by this offers the unemployment rate will decre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 5.04856512141 297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 222.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6981981982 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1332764556 2.5805825403 83% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 145.348785872 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 311.4 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7754568524 49.2860985944 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 110.228320801 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7142857143 21.698381199 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5714285714 7.06452816374 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076893306703 0.272083759551 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604965478024 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088609540769 0.0662205650399 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416375097092 0.162205337803 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372290910217 0.0443174109184 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.7273730684 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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