Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
There are some arguments that male and female have different capabilities. Thus, some jobs are corresponsive for women. I completely agree with this opinion.
There are some reasons why men and women have different capabilities. The first reason is the labour productivity which means about the distinctive health of people. Men have different capabilities from women because men is stronger than women. Therefore, when they work together, we can see that men is more dynamic than women. Furthermore, the spiritual different between two genders is the second reason for different capabilities. Female or male may have a lot of career ambitions, this is why they try to move up the career ladder , which will help them reach at a high level than others. This is shown us the difference of ability in two genders.
There are some suitable jobs will bring to women lots of advantages. Being a fashion icon or a professional make up is an example of suitable job for women. Females have a good grasp of beauty and fashion which will give them countless opportunities to promote their products. Women have aesthetic and they know how to make other people prettier by make up or hairdo. Also, they can create the latest trend to the target audience. Women will have best job prospects when they are working in beauty and fashion field. This field leads women to progress rapidly in their career than men do.
In conclusion, i do concur on the different capabilities about men and women, I also believe that in some situations there are some jobs are more suitable for women than men.
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- Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for women.To what extent do you agree or disagree ? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90334572491 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65936500357 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520446096654 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1991715299 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2777777778 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412319260702 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14970137819 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122670421319 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310034448501 0.151304729494 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674027548092 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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