Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the United States. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
Leaders influence others in numerous ways. Many help others with their philanthropy and wisdom. In past this world has created many great leaders who have changed the ideology for good. One of them who impacted lives of millions of people with his moral ideologies that held true to not only in that era but also today was Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi popularly known as Mahatma Gandhi.
First, he is revered as the father of the nation in India. He promoted non-violence and satyagrah (upliftment of truth) that played a crucial role to eradicate British rule from India by strategizing rallies and protests that undermined British rule in India without any physical fight. One of the most famous non-violent movements was the Dandi march, which was protest against salt tax levied by British government that affected common people. This showed the characteristics of a person who walked the talk and lead by example, millions of people not only in India but also around the globe.
Second, he instigated world peace, religious harmony and equality towards all. India is a country where people reside from different cultures and religion. His speech and love for fellow countrymen made them united towards common enemy. He helped in abolishing myth of untouchable cast by treating them as equals by giving them home in his ashram. He also penned letter to Hitler pleading to spare lives of Jews for the sake of humanity. His humble and kind nature inspires people around the world to instill these qualities.
Finally he helped tp tear down the British industry by promoting hand made products and persuaded people to do their own work. It boomed the local industry in India creating better economy for people.
Seldom do we see that the influence of world leaders is not only confined to the public but the other fellow world leaders also and Mahatma Gandhi is one such exception. A man with stellar attitude towards the masses and a leader who believed that unity and truth are the weapons with which any battles can be won truly deserves utmost reverence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.9520958084 8% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 347.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97694524496 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43654446176 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576368876081 0.468620217663 123% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.2812904712 57.8364921388 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9444444444 119.503703932 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 23.324526521 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.70786347227 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134620577581 0.218282227539 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444458751249 0.0743258471296 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432158668766 0.0701772020484 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758660199921 0.128457276422 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388217407007 0.0628817314937 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 98.500998004 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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