How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reason and specitif examples to support your answer
In this era, people’s already ave technology that give information example one of them is television. Television is instrument information that be enjoy with audio and video, and can get with price that cheat depend need consumer. The television have many program to we can be watched. I agree with statement with said television give influence people. In my essay, I will explore my answer and some reasons and example.
First of all, the people’s already enjoy with television. Many program that make people enjoy with television. All of age can enjoy with program television, parent moreover child enjoy with agenda such as: cartoon, opera soap, news, and entertainment. Many people are follow style or mode in television.
Many program that follow people until their life style. The opera soap, actress and actor are beautiful and handsome become one the all reason to their follow. From life style moreover their hobby to be example. They think if they follow style actress and actor, they are become one of them become actress.
Life style television that luxurious from clothes, house, car, and everything they use, we want to have also. Besides reason in top, it is because they love one program so they follow all that they love it. What are things that love such someone, so they follow the people to be alternative their hobby.
To sum up, the people can follow everything that she want, they become fans about someone that they love.
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Sentence: In this era, people's already ave technology that give information example one of them is television.
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