You have receive a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy ? use specific reasons and details to support your answer

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You have receive a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy ? use specific reasons and details to support your answer

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Sentence: I get such as land n house like if I need much money to sale it need time that very long than investment as jewelry.
Description: The fragment it need time is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace need with verb, past tense

flaws:
No. of Different Words: 129 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.5 21.0

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 16 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 300 350
No. of Characters: 1341 1500
No. of Different Words: 129 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.162 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.47 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.254 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 67 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.538 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.564 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.212 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5