Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved this away people live? Use specitif reason and examples to support your answers.
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved this away people live? Use specitif reason and examples to support your answers.
The food has very Important to people, food need to add power energy that they do job each day. Food that is healty can get everywhere. He people are choice work at office than house jobs. Nowadays , very numerous food that is easy. Food has become easier to prepare, I will try to support my answer with some reasons and example.
First of all, the people that are cannot time to cook food, sure they use the equipment to cook. Food has become easy to prepare because equipment that is use ever included rice cooker, refrigerator, blender and the rest. The things are all food easier, cannot need long time to food. When they have job, they can cook too, but effect is the people become lazy. It is because they become habit . However the things very helping they because they can work 2 job in time which the same.
Food that are product from equipment, sometimes not good to healty. It is because product or material in made equipment until get taste that no delicious than ways people cook use equipment nature without have to use listric. The way equipment natural are they use things and need to time for long to work them such as: solve.
Another important aspect of this is that food that easier to prepare such as: food junk food. This food, very fast and easier to prepare. Benefit from this consumsi food Is cannot healthy . It is because food junk food contain that is food endure. When we consumption more consequence we get sick.
To sum up, food has become easier to prepare with use equipment but each that easy sure cause effect beside.
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Sentence: He people are choice work at office than house jobs.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to He and people
Description: The word choice is not usually used as an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to choice
Sentence: Benefit from this consumsi food Is cannot healthy .
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and healthy
Sentence: It is because food junk food contain that is food endure.
Description: The fragment food endure . is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace endure with verb, past tense
Description: The fragment food contain that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace contain with verb, past tense
Sentence: When we consumption more consequence we get sick.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to we and consumption
Sentence: Use specitif reason and examples to support your answers.
Error: specitif Suggestion: specific
Sentence: Food that is healty can get everywhere.
Error: healty Suggestion: health
Error: cooker Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Food that are product from equipment, sometimes not good to healty.
Error: healty Suggestion: health
Sentence: It is because product or material in made equipment until get taste that no delicious than ways people cook use equipment nature without have to use listric.
Error: listric Suggestion: ?
Sentence: Benefit from this consumsi food Is cannot healthy .
Error: consumsi Suggestion: ?
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