You recently red an article in newspaper and come to know that article was written by your freiend. Since you don't have the contact details for your friend. Write a letter to newspaper and mention.
- What is the article about?
- Why you need contact details?
- How newspaper company can help you?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request information about my friend whose recent article is published in your newspaper last Monday.
The article was about the life of our professor who won the national awards due to his academic achievements. All the facts and information provided in this write-up are accurate except one, which is about his marriage date.
I have tried to contact my friend several times to inform him about the wrong information but it seems his contact number has been changed. Therefore, I need help from your agency to provide me his updated information.
I would really appreciate if you can get updated contacts details from your records and send me via email. I am sending my personal identity card along with this letter to preserve your privacy policy.
I hope you will process this information as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Vivek Dhiman
- People are getting married and having their children in their thirty's rather than in young age. Do you think its positive or negative development. 61
- Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- Some people think that new technology is improving the lives of workers other say it has more disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion 88
- These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 100
- Some people think that young people should choose their profession by themselves. Other believe that their parents choose for them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o inform him about the wrong information but it seems his contact number has been...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ter to preserve your privacy policy. I hope you will process this information ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06711409396 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60134435971 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704697986577 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8639252317 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2875108618 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105264634408 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607040413625 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144338435761 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625442748993 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.