Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about the problems.
Health is wealth is a well-known proverb. It is evident that no one can enjoy life in its true essence if the person is not physically fit. Unfortunately many working people do not have a healthy lifestyle; the major factor behind this is the lack of exercise. Exercise is an essential activity along with good diet. People nowadays are so encircled in their working schedules that they neglect their own health.
In running days, work pressures are increased, owing to rapidly changing market trends and revenue expectations; companies are considering employees as machines to work for 24/7. Consequently, workers health gets affected. In order to maintain work life balance, people overlook their own self. People have become workaholic which is adversely affecting their lives. In the longer run, people would have money to spend but would not have strength to enjoy the moments.
It is not only the responsibility of an individual but also the company people are working for. At every workplace, gym facility should be available with required equipments and instructors. Awareness campaigns should run over the importance of exercise and designated time should be allotted to each employee for exercise. At individual level, people should adapt healthy lifestyle, eat healthy diet and avoid irregular meals. Constant sitting and computer usage cause back pain and weak eye sight. Companies need to make sure that comfortable seats are provided with back rests and screen protectors are installed at every laptop or desktop computers.
In a nutshell, it is irrespective, how much money a person is making if he is spending the same amount for treatment of different diseases later on. Health should be given priority, there are certain factors affecting our health already such as pollution, noise and stress. We should take proactive measures to prevent early old age symptoms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...computer usage cause back pain and weak eye sight. Companies need to make sure that comfo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, so, well, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26910299003 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74212595523 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644518272425 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6489674398 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4736842105 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21052631579 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286074891337 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780401404362 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664432393264 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163927038739 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101997033648 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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