whether corporation should take the responsibilities of the welfare of the society and environment or look for money in every way possible adhereing the laws
The topic provided by the author raises a controversial issue of whether corporation should take the responsibilities of the welfare of the society and environment or look for money in every way possible adhereing the laws. Indisputably, taking either option may solve any one aspect of our or corporations problem.Nevertheless, to get a wellrounded improvement to our quality of life,taking any one side will be gratuitious.Thus, I generally disagree with the opinion by the author that we should take any one way and would argue that the balance between the both will be more fruitful approach.
First of all, well being of the society and environment is one of the foremost duty of the corporation.To illustrate this I would like to point out the situation of hygene and pollution in our cities. This will not only harm the environment but also the human being living in it. As a palpable example, In a popular magazine “The Hindu” an article says that some of the scientist are observing high decline in ice in the arctic region and foreboding about a couple of meter increase in sea water level.In this circumstance, obviously we have to look at the corporation to investigate and identify the cause of this problem. Consequently it is obvious that government have to take responsibilities for the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate.
Furthermore, corporation should also take the responsibility for the revenue with which the can serve their place. Specifically, the taxation process,better schemes for doing business, projects in which corporation has a substantial share to collect a high amount of revenue. Both common sesnse and personal experience told us that without sufficient funding no well being can be done either for society or for human being. Hence, greater revenue ensures the well being of the society as well as the environment.
Admittedly, the wellbeing of the society and environment is correlated to the revenue collected by the corporation.Thus without a proper balance between them none can be achieved.
In conclusion, although some may argue to take any one position for the betterment of corporation, a balanced approach will be the key of success for any corporation. As long as some measurement are taken and people a involved corporation should look into both the matter with same gravity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16623376623 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28650367808 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516883116883 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.9198093327 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6153846154 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 5.21951772744 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34093754067 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134019157158 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16558387932 0.0758088955206 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174091456132 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104768742623 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.