Your friend wants to spend a holiday trip with you, but it is not suitable for you. Write a letter to your friend:
explain why it is not suitable for you
giving the suggestion.
Dear James,
I am writing in response to your letter where you asked me to accompany you for vacation trip next week.
I am extremely sorry to inform you that I will not be able to join you as I have one meeting scheduled with client, visiting India next week. unfortunately, It will be a busy week and infeasible for me to take work day off during that period. I really want to accompany you but I am helpless and hope that you will understand my situation.
However, I suggest that we may plan our trip in midwinter. Firstly, we will have Christmas vacations at that time and It will be mutually convenient time for us to plan our excursion. Moreover, pleasant weather will add an additional fun to our trip.
I hope that you would accept my apology and consent with my suggestion. If you acknowledge your 'OK', I will go ahead with booking our itinerary in advance. Let me know what you think.
Love,
Ell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunately
... with client, visiting India next week. unfortunately, It will be a busy week and infeasible ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: ADD_AN_ADDITIONAL[1]
Message: This phrase might be redundant. Use simply 'add a fun'.
Suggestion: add a fun
...ursion. Moreover, pleasant weather will add an additional fun to our trip. I hope that you would a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et me know what you think. Love, Ell
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52694610778 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61263187521 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4827964139 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251436717368 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947042952106 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776469359302 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178309886477 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931581211771 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.