A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at an institution or organisation as part of their programme. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of course requirement?
Nowadays, majority of university programs state that their students should work during the studies in order to fulfill the requirements of the program. This trend has both, advantages and drawbacks.
Firstly, university gives only a theoretical knowledge and only about 50% of it will be used while you work. Working as an intern during the studies is useful due to some reasons. The main one is that you can apply all theories you have learned. What is more, you can gain practical skills, which are highly needed if you want to get a good job. In some cases, your colleagues from your part-time job can help you in future, for instance, by offering a full-time employment. Moreover, unpaid job may help you to understand, if you are suitable for this kind of job or not.
Turning to the other side, some downsides may be noticed. Students often say that student years are always stressful and painful. Students are burdened with a huge list of homework, coursework and different projects, thus any type of job can hinder students both physical and mental development. Also, a lot of employers set strict rules when it comes to working schedule. A lot of students overwork during the week and even work at weekends, so that work-life balance is not followed and it may cause different problems, not only at university but in personal life too.
As can be concluded, there are both benefits and downsides of working during the studies, however, I think that downsides outweigh all advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...es from your part-time job can help you in future, for instance, by offering a full-time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, kind of, in some cases, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92913385827 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64682904839 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61811023622 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9995361757 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4285714286 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151520500499 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509351891833 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389458799173 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092643106205 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567944929662 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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