Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Considering the today life conditions, I highly inclined to take the side of this statement that the life today is more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. Regarding the technology advances, medicine improvement and economic enhancement due to the society development, the life conditions is more comfortable than past. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the technology advances bring about lots of convenient for our life. Being one of the most proliferated prominence characteristics for all countries, the diffusion of the technology plays a crucial role for people living. The communication improvement, ease of traveling, and preventing the time and energy wasting can be implied as the prefect examples of technology benefits.
Another primary reason of the more comfortable conditions of nowadays life can be attributed to the significant improvement in the health condition. It is undeniable that there are enormous death in the past due to the deficiency in the effective drugs and professional treatment methods. In all society form past to now, there is always a causal relationship between the standard level of the life on the one hand and the quality of the medical facilities on the other hand. It goes without saying that if a government provides the appropriate health conditions for the people, it can be indicated as the developed society. As the result, the lack of medical methods and the insufficient drugs in the past made the life harder than now.
Aside from the point I made above, the critical role of economic in the improvement of today life conditions cannot be ignored. It is obvious that in the past, there are remarkable lacks in the essential needs of people life. For instance, as the results of the two world wars, the most of the people bothered from the lacks of clothing, food and basic facilities. The gradual improvement in the incorporation development and the creation of the innovative businesses bring about the desirable wealth for people in most countries. Although, I cannot strongly mention that the economic situations in the all country enhance categorically, the present trend of the economic growth shows the legible modification in the life of the people. Consequently, I can indicate that the today life is more easier that the past.
Taking all of these perspectives into account, I cannot agree more about the noticeable improvement in our life conditions compared with the conditions when my grandparents were children. Regarding the crucial roles of the technology, medical methods and economic enhancement, as far as I am concerned, life conditions will be improved in the future too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 790, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
..., I can indicate that the today life is more easier that the past. Taking all of these p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, regarding, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25113122172 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07617521521 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468325791855 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1946703344 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.157894737 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2631578947 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241617732421 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773729407536 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107112156095 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149723157231 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129951568633 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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