Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion
Growth in the economy is one of the main denominators of a country’s development as believed by many governments all over the world. But there are many other indicators that measure the growth of a country as a whole, such as social development, health indices, agricultural and industrial, sustainable development etc. However, in my opinion, economic development should be the most important one among them.
Firstly, one of the main denominators of the country’s development is their Gross Domestic Product (GDP), which is used to compare and rank countries in the development scale. In further explanation, it is the sum of values of all the products and services produced by a country in that particular year. Therefore, it represents most of all the other parameters of development in all production and services categories. Secondly, another main denominator is the Per-capita Income, which is the average income of a citizen in that country in a particular year. Obviously, if every citizen gets a good income, invariably the health, social and other parameters would also develop proportionately. Thirdly, if a country’s economy is developed, undoubtedly the industries, transport, infrastructure, defense and security etc. would also develop as the government is able to spend money for those area as well as to help the poor and helpless people of the country.
On the contrary, growth of economic indices would represent the data as a whole and it may not represent individual citizen of the country. Therefore, even if the per-capita income is high in the country, it does not mean that every citizen enjoys the same income. There would invariably be a spectrum of people from ultra-rich to poor and homeless people. Similarly, development in other parameters like social, health etc. would also not be a representation of the individual citizen, but as an average or as a whole.
In conclusion, I firmly believe the development of the economy should be the main focus of any government as it would affect the development of all the other parameters also both directly and indirectly towards the betterment of them. At the same time government should not neglect any other area also, because that would again affect the development of the economy negatively both directly and indirectly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 895, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'those areas'?
Suggestion: this area; those areas
...e government is able to spend money for those area as well as to help the poor and helples...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...evelopment of the economy should be the main focus of any government as it would affect th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18861512996 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448924731183 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5198692964 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.882352941 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8235294118 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107320766167 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406346964943 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419514557919 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760525399809 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342935873564 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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