IELTS Writing task 1.0
The pie charts compare the proportions of using water on 3 different usages, which are in industry, agriculture and domestic, among six main areas, which are South – North America, Europe, Africa, Central and South East Asia, of the world. Overall, agriculture consumes a lot of water while industry steps at 2nd position and the ratios are alternative in different areas.
Obviously, agriculture is dominant over the world and the consumed water amount reaches highest proportion at 88% in Asia and lowest proportion at 32% in Europe. The less-developed areas have a high consumed water proportion in agriculture at more than 80% such as: 88% in Central Asia, 84% in Africa, 81% in South East Asia and 71% in South America. In developed areas, such as North America and Europe, the consumed water proportions in agriculture are lower than less-developed areas but still account for more than 30%.
The consumed water in industry accounts around a half propotion. In developed areas, the proportion of consumed water has a slightly difference, such as: 53% in Europe and 48% in North Africa. There is a big contrary in less-developed areas, the proportions account a minority, such as: 12% in South East Asia and 5% in Central Asia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'reaches the highest'.
Suggestion: reaches the highest
...the world and the consumed water amount reaches highest proportion at 88% in Asia and lowest pr...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('difference') instead of another adjective.
...s, the proportion of consumed water has a slightly difference, such as: 53% in Europe and 48% in Nort...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04390243902 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86352681876 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492682926829 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2193879575 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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