It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big
city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
I agree with the statement that children better to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Children is collecting from little child who still needs full attention from people. Because their age still young age around five till ten years old. Below I will develop on the following points.
The first should be noted, Children who is raising in small town will get to be better act because they not contaminate with society like in huge town. Culture in big town really bad for kids who process to become adult such as having special relationship in their ages. For instance, brood these days who live in massive city whose ages around eight till ten years old already know about special relationship, instead numerous of them have been including in that even though their ages are still young age. But when I tried to go to small zone, kids in there were playing normally with others children. surprisingly, when I asked about special relationship, they said that is forbidden for their ages. So, from that tragedy I think surroundings in large area not good enough for growing up kids.
I see another good aspect about mature there too is culture. Brood generally who keep on in small town have own civilization to guide their live. They usually have special awareness from their parents which core about live knowledge and they are great. Because they are not only learning on it, but they also implement it in their live. From good way of live which they have gotten, it will influence kids to be good. So, hold on tradition like kids are doing in small town will works too than in big town.
In summarize, in my opinion that children better mature in thin zone because it spread good things that cannot be taken in huge town.
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Children who is raising in
Children who are raising in
because they not contaminate with society
because they do not contaminate with society
Sentence: Culture in big town really bad for kids who process to become adult such as having special relationship in their ages.
Description: The word process is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to process
Sentence: But when I tried to go to small zone, kids in there were playing normally with others children. surprisingly, when I asked about special relationship, they said that is forbidden for their ages.
Description: The token in is not usually followed by an existential there
Suggestion: Refer to in and there
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to others and children
Sentence: So, hold on tradition like kids are doing in small town will works too than in big town.
Description: The fragment , hold on is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace hold with verb, past participle
Description: The word will is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to will works
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