There are more men or women in certain jobs and there is nothing we can change about it. Do you agree?
Time spins and with every spins there are a change and change can bring doubts, conflicts, and controversies, especially when they are related to present and past, traditional and modern and issues of men and women equality at work are no exception. But no school of thoughts has ever suggested that in order with contemporary, we should replace discard what is old and traditional. I strongly opine that there are certain jobs for each gender.
Over the past decades, women have faced challenged bravely. Men were given with every right but women have to work for it. She proofs herself everywhere and did not let the world dominate her. I think women can do as much as men can do. because of the women personality, she is considered to be caring, emotional and soft heartens person whereas men can hide their emotions easily. Women are paid less as compared to men. Today, Queen Elizabeth is holding the title of the most powerful monarchy of the world. She reigns more than her father did.
whereas, some jobs are like which women can not do. Manual and labor jobs which required strength is a bit hard for women. It is not because they are weak. Being a daughter or mother is already a tough job for her. even, men struggle due to his masculine. the pressure of family or children is so high on their shoulders. if women do not work then whole responsibility comes on man only which as they can not express their emotions or feelings they tend to suffocate n difficult times.
in nutshell, change is happening but at a slow pace. it will take ages to remove gender equality. low salary and boring tasks are given to women whereas men explore risky and frightening working conditions. many families have broadened their horizon when it comes to job, childcare, and housework.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, whereas, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 312.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73717948718 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51308214232 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608974358974 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6551724138 174% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9225631525 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1818181818 104.977214359 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.59090909091 7.25397266985 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320023032851 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825107652773 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792031040279 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173154484749 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496308639008 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 12.6369458128 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.