The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other field is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In the given statement the author is saying that by instilling cooperation in the young people we can help them to prepare for leadership, industry, or other fields and not by competition. Obviously, a sense of competition brings how to get ahead of all and a sense of cooperation brings how we can help several people among us for a greater cause.
Leadership in any fields requires a person to understand the whole community, if they are not able to understand the cause and problem of their people then they are not a good leader. For a person to inspire others, that person also has to work with them, live with them and understand their life and their thinking process then only the leader will get respect and admiration. A cannot cannot accept those leaders who only care for themselves and does not care about the needs and feelings of others. In this case either the society gets unnerved by the behaviour of their leaders or the leaders have to leave their position because of the protests that the people starts if they doesn't get what they want.
Young people are the most energetic one and have ability to do anything only if they are given proper knowledge and skill. If we instil in them a sense of cooperation from the beginning then they will always be ready to help others in turn threy will be the helping hands of the society. The people will like them and the leaders like them will be liked by the whole society and even they will be recognised throughout the society.
Through competition we cannot help the whole community. In order to help the whole community there should be the sense of helping others. For example, there is a man who revived many deserted rivers in Rajasthan and also helping others states of India in reviving rivers which has become devoid of water. There was a very bad situation in Rajasthan because the people were migrating from the villages to cities. There was no water left for irrigation and drinking. But, because of that man, we can say the great leader of the people who helped them in reviving those rivers are known throughout the world. If he had not cooperated with the people then he would have been the great leader.
In summary, i would like to say that a cooperation is a much needed thing to help our people. A competition is much needed thing to do better than others but it cannot be used to help a whole community. We can do competition to from other government and organisation to be the best than others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: cannot
...ader will get respect and admiration. A cannot cannot accept those leaders who only care for ...
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...protests that the people starts if they doesnt get what they want. Young people are...
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...y are given proper knowledge and skill. If we instil in them a sense of cooperatio...
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... rivers are known throughout the world. If he had not cooperated with the people t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, as to, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 445.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59325842697 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44020111717 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426966292135 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7639977527 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.578947368 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4210526316 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26315789474 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226967119393 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741467921992 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801617710659 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136879589656 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890742595728 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.