Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
At the end of the new century, with the development of human's modern society, more and more people tend to explore new things by new technology more than before, Although many would argue that the technology negative impact to people's, In my opinion, the technology has a far greater impact to society and the humans to improved and became success I would suggest two reasons based on my general facts in addition to my personal experiences to support the argument.
The first aspect to point out is that no one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that in today's sophisticated world we live in the technology became is the most important nowadays about anything else. technology is the most important part of our lives today. the efficiency of a society is measured by the degree and the quality of its used technology. Admittedly, technology is omnipresent in our daily life. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has elaborated above. take an example a young people in university they need a lot of books and several references to combine much information to conduct academic research which is able to discuss with his professor, I believe that technology made education more easier and faster than before due to the student used a lot of machines Like, Smartphone, Laptop,and also TV to gain all data at the same time.
Secondly, many benefits quickly stem from modern technology, to be more specific, when I talk about transportation and cars now, a technology developed is the final reason. technology helps car producers to prepare advanced and hi-tech in the market. For instance, in the past when my grandfather wants to travel by his car he couldn't able to identify the road to reach the place he needs because he didn't a guide on the road but now many cars in the market have a navigation system. This system is seriously useful specifically in both large and small cities and off-road. you can imagine that you drive in a freeway. the navigation system which contain GPS, global position system, and the internet provides the best route for you. so, it can help us to save our time.
As you can see, based on the argument above, I strongly believe that the life today is ten times as easy and comfortable as it was in the fifty or sixty years ago. Developing technologies and inventing several tools make the world a better place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75174013921 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66766462629 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561484918794 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.796987685 48.9658058833 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.470588235 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3529411765 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21013190838 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759124295656 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156821063528 0.0737576698707 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201402941911 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.241052702114 0.0645574589148 373% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.