The best way to reduce air pollution is for the government to raise the cost of fuel
Currently, due to the serious environmental problems confronted with us, both the individuals and the authority attach more importance to the protection of the environment. Some citizens reckon that in order to inhibit air contamination, the government is supposed to enact some policies to raise the cost of fuel. While others suggest that other effective measures, such as awaking the public’s awareness, ought to be imposed. Personally speaking, I cannot concur with the opinion of raising the price of fuel and my opinion can be substantiated as follows.
To start with, what this measure takes is mere the mounting financial burden on city dwellers. Concretely, nowadays, people’s living qualities have been upgraded owing to the development of technology and people are used to the convenient lifestyle. Therefore, the increasing price of fossil fuel fails to prevent them from benefiting from different kinds of devices driven by fossil fuels, like private cars, water-heater and so on. Due to their insistence on using these fossil energies, their family finance will suffer, instead of reducing their use of fossil fuels. Worse still, provided that the price of coals continuously increases, which goes beyond people’s purchasing power, people are likely to harbor resentment toward the authority and this will evidently harm to the harmonious relationship between the regimes and citizens.
What’s more, it is imperative for the government to take more effective and firm measures to deal with serious problems. Initially, the government is responsible for implementing some policies to offer preference to the science-oriented enterprises. Specifically, at the aim of prohibiting some industries emitting exhaust fumes into the atmosphere, the authority must stimulate them to shoulder their responsibility of environment protection, hence enacting the policy of levying higher taxes on those industries involved with severe air contamination and offer preference to the enterprises developing in eco-friendly approaches enables to guide companies to develop in accordance with the theory of sustainable development. In addition, as the old saying goes, every a little makes a mickle, the individual’s strengths should not be ignored. Obviously, the regime is capable of awaking public’s awareness of environment protection by delivering books or scripts to them, which not only enlarges citizens’ knowledge about the environment but also enables them to have a rough comprehension of the importance of environment protection. With the knowledge and awareness erected by the government, citizens are able to make joint efforts to reduce contamination. For instance, they can reduce their use of private cars to avoiding intensifying haze, they can prefer to use the electronic devices which are qualified for the environmental standards or they can diminish their uses of non-biodegradable plastics. From what has been mentioned above, there are a bunch of effective measures can be taken to address the issues of environment protection.
Admittedly, raising the cost of fuel probably reduces people’s propensity of purchasing it, however in the long run, since people’s desires of utilizing these energies are not diminished, this measure is doomed to fail to control the problem of air pollution.
In a nutshell, from what has been mentioned above, there are a couple of measures that are more effective than raising the cost of fossil fuels, like implementing preferred policies to encourage enterprises to develop in a eco-friendly approach, raising individuals’ awareness and so on, therefore the reduction can be achieved by the concerted efforts made by people from all walks of lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 101.0 52.1666666667 194% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 8.0752688172 409% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3193.0 1977.66487455 161% => OK
No of words: 565.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65132743363 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30904351312 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 1017.0 618.680645161 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.884460117 48.9658058833 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.052631579 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7368421053 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159123165038 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503059915121 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638511341684 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102472815159 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508004624202 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 11.7677419355 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 58.1214874552 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.1575268817 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 10.9000537634 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 170.0 86.8835125448 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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