Most of the parents at sometimes find disapproval of the ways teachers are teaching their childern. It's not suggested for the parents to express their disapproval to teachers.
Currently, society has witnessed an unprecedented accumulation of material affluence, therefore there is an increasing number of parents paying more attention to the education of their children, especially schooling. Under this circumstance, some parents find that teachers’ pedagogical approaches sometimes conflict with their notions of upbringing, hence, it comes to the question that whether parents ought to express their disapproval to teachers. Personally speaking, I contend that disapproval should be expressed to teachers and my view can be substantiated as follows.
To start with, delivering disapproval to teachers is conducive to the development of children both in mentality and physics. Concretely, some elder teachers without receiving a systematic education of teaching tend to enact corporal punishment on those students behaving badly, instead of telling them the reasons why they are supposed to comply with school disciplines. Obviously, the corporal punishment is likely to give rise to some wounds, even some serious injuries, therefore in this situation, parents must convey their disapproval to teachers to prevent them from further hurting children’s physical health. Meanwhile, some inexperienced teachers usually have a preference for a small bunch of students in a class, which renders children a sense of prejudice and makes them feel not interested in studies. Due to the serious effects that teachers’ inappropriate teaching methods exert on students, parents ought to point out teachers’ errors so as to adjust children’s attitude and engage their interests in studies. Merely by doing so, can parents help their children develop in a mentally and physically healthy approach.
What’s more, conveying disapproval also constitutes a stepping stone in the process of civilization. To be more specific, nowadays, the whole society makes concerted efforts to reinforce the quality of education at the aim of strengthening national power. With the belief propagated by the authority, each individual, including parents, is obliged to make a contribution to the development of the country. That is to say, the disapproval conveyed to teachers not only prevents them from exerting detrimental effects on specific children but also renders them more opportunities to sharpen their pragmatic skills in teaching, or even enables them to advance their pedagogical approaches. Just as the saying goes, every a little makes a mickle, through the joint efforts made by each parent, the quality of schooling can be upgraded step by step. Compared to the contribution made by the government, this kind of advancement is proposed by parents, hence, the benefits of the advancement are also geared toward parents, which illuminates that these efforts are more beneficial to parents to accommodate their educational desires.
Admittedly, some individuals are reluctant to tell teachers their disapproval for fear of annoying teachers, nevertheless, provided that parents convey their suggestion in manner, teachers with excellent etiquette will not feel unpleasant with such disapproval, on the contrary, they are likely to feel that parents are concerned about their work, thus they are more devoted to fulfilling their responsibilities to educate little children desiring for more profound knowledge.
In a nutshell, from what has been mentioned above, I would like to reiterate my opinion that when the disapproval emerges between parents and teachers, parents are supposed to express their attitudes to teachers so as to ensure children’s growing ambiance and enhance the quality of schooling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ught to point out teachers' errors so as to adjust children's attitude and eng...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...sts in studies. Merely by doing so, can parents help their children develop in a mental...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... to express their attitudes to teachers so as to ensure children's growing ambiance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, while, as to, even so, kind of, on the contrary, to start with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3110.0 1977.66487455 157% => OK
No of words: 542.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73800738007 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20415064212 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523985239852 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 951.3 618.680645161 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3548176888 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.941176471 100.406767564 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8823529412 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422624694791 0.236089414692 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135766602937 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109735376397 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26929097995 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732833246215 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 11.7677419355 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 58.1214874552 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.1575268817 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 10.9000537634 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.01818996416 126% => OK
difficult_words: 168.0 86.8835125448 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.002688172 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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