The absence of money leads to unhappiness, but money doesn't bring happiness. Is it true? What is your opinion?
We all live in a world that is surrounded by sorrows, suffering, grief and happiness. It is asserted that lack of financial funds cause sadness, however, money can not buy happiness. I completely agree with this notion and intend to discuss my views in subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, it is irrefutable in many cases that deficiency in monetary funds can results unhappiness. This is because money can buy many things, which can bring smile on many faces. In this materialistic world, where everyone strives to have the best lifestyle running towards money since it can help them to enjoy their dream life. Desires of many people, for instance, having luxurious cars, big homes, expensive cloths and jewelry can be bought by money, thereby, accomplishing these goals not only make them happy but also enhance the feeling of self satisfaction. In contrast, if an individual does not have enough funds to have desired lifestyle then it may follow dejection. Moreover, it is due to inadequacy of money that many people in world are unable to afford basic facilities such as education and healthcare, and failure to fulfill essential needs in life makes a person depress and hopeless.
On the other hand, this is also true that money can not buy happiness. The prominent reason is that financial gains can not remove anguish and sufferings. To quote an example, a mother who has lost his son in war, money is no value as her tears and grievance can not be wiped through financial aid and to make her glee, but paying sympathy might help her to calm down. Furthermore, there are many people in world living away from their parents and children, earning huge amount of salaries but still not happy due to the unavailability of the company of their family members. As a result, having a lot of financial resources are useless for them, and they end up moving back to their homes and accept happy, simple and meaningful life with their families.
In conclusion, although the insufficient funds could lead sadness, yet money can not help in recovering inner psychological bonds and replacing the position of a loved one. It can buy many tangible items but can not buy harmonious and healthy emotional life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89361702128 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66518557028 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579787234043 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1593168259 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141994268956 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540035661265 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585529835145 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903549478908 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158587344232 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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