In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in countryside. Some people believe that it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
Due to vast growth of population, the whole world is confronting residential problems. The construction of new premises in countryside become a considering issue. However, some people think that countryside should be reserved and this essay will agree with statement.
To begin with, the countryside is main source of food production, therefore, if the residential premises will construct in countryside, then the production of crops will be affected. So the rural area should be reserved for agriculture land and the adequate plan for building should be introduced by government. For instance, in JAPAN, infrastructure of building developed as skyscrapers. The buildings are being constructed by vertically; hence this approach leaves the land for farming purpose. Secondly, the environment balance is being maintained by flora of rural area. Most of the land of countryside is covered with forests, which are the primary source of eco system stability. So these reasons are the favour of not constructing in countryside land for houses.
Furthermore, the access of natural resources will stop, if the construction is being done in that particular area. Thus, it becomes an imperative to reserve a place for natural resources. A part from that, if the houses are being established in countryside then the life cycles of flora and fauna will interrupt and this may also cause of disturbance of eco system. Some hostile species might create hindrance for human beings. Moreover, the vast of deforestation and huge establishment in rural area can appear a number of problems such as global warming, acid rain and pollution for mankind, whereas last few decades have witnessed of this phenomenon. This perception attracts individuals to not build any premises in countryside.
To sum up, no doubts the housing for human beings is the main challenge nowadays, thus the establishment of these homes can be done in countryside. However, due to some reasons such as feasts production, environmental issue, land reservation for flora and fauna, the housing in rural area should be mitigated. In my view, the alternatives should be approached for residential building rather than to grab rural land for construction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, no doubt, such as, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36494252874 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12740197027 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537356321839 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.878388979 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2631578947 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.31578947368 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168236364902 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613482085045 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416887589764 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114188823015 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00811958806212 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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