People often college our university for many different reason (for example: new experiences, carrier preparation , and increased knowledge). Why do you think people often college our university ? use specific reason and example to support your answer .
Education is very important for people in the world. The numerous pupil get education with school from junior high school until university is next from school such as university. University is place to people who are continue to their study with more in depth example increase knowledge, carrier preparation and new experience. From the all, aim they want to get better life before.
First of all, many people get and looking for education at university with increase knowledge such as they from junior high school get next study at university with mayor which they like it. Besides they get increase knowledge, they get skill about mayor that their get example mayor is chemistry. In there are, they learn about the study chemistry that cannot they get education at junior high school in specific.
Secondly, they are next school level university is carrier preparation. In there, we see besides to get increase knowledge, they also get skill to become what that they want. We know to get mayor chemistry besides they get education about chemistry usually they want become something that depend with education that they get such as lecture or research.
Furthermore, they get new experience about their study. They get study style that very different with junior high school, at university is sure have many duty and need many time and mind to work it. From the all they get many relations, study style and team work. They get relation between friends that together in process to study is very busy. And each university always give opportunity with their student do job straining company that cooperation with the Universitas.
Finally, from all explain aim people get and next continue is to get job that good and reach their dream.
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Sentence: From the all, aim they want to get better life before.
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Sentence: First of all, many people get and looking for education at university with increase knowledge such as they from junior high school get next study at university with mayor which they like it.
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Sentence: In there are, they learn about the study chemistry that cannot they get education at junior high school in specific.
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Sentence: From the all they get many relations, study style and team work.
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Sentence: Finally, from all explain aim people get and next continue is to get job that good and reach their dream.
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