Essay topics:
The char and table below give information about healtcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.
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Sentence: In the America continental, Canada is the highest country which provides many beds in hospital and United States shows similarly trend that is considerably 3.800 and 3.700 units.
Description: The fragment America continental , is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace continental with adverb
Description: A noun, singular, proper is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to America and continental
Description: The word similarly is not usually used as an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to similarly
Sentence: Therefore, America is less country of the all samples which serves bed in hospital.
Description: The token the is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, pre-quantifier
Suggestion: Refer to the and all
Sentence: To conclude, the number of facilities such as bed in hospital is significantly to push the average of life expectancy although government spending is not significantly to influence the average of life expectancy.
Description: The fragment is significantly to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace significantly with adjective
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No. of Words: 284 200
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 284 200
No. of Characters: 1433 1000
No. of Different Words: 129 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.046 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.786 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.697 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.889 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.455 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.76 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.183 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4