Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together.
Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
One of the most conspicous trends of today's world is some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities but others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying to gether. There is widespread worry that this would only to myraid of concern in the country. I will discuss my opinion and some reasons on upcoming paragraphs.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of stance. The most preponderant one is that schools should select the students according to their different abilities but sometimes it way is not good for the students life. If the schools select studing on differents abilities it is very benefical for the student because many students can like to different on different field. If the schools select the students according their ability so, many students can not motivate in their work and study.
Secondly, nowadays students like to freedom and they do to like work in their life. So if the schools studing on different abilities many students can encourage easily in their life. Today, every work are depend on technology system so, studying on different abilities is very important in these days.
In conclusion I think that studying on different abilities is more benefiacal rather than students according to their academic ability because studying on different field is more helpful for the students life. Students get the job easily in every work field because they
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- Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 65
- Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 65
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ut sometimes it way is not good for the students life. If the schools select studing on ...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and they do to like work in their life. So if the schools studing on different abilit...
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ly in their life. Today, every work are depend on technology system so, studying on di...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...different field is more helpful for the students life. Students get the job easily in ev...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asily in every work field because they
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1375 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5769780698 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 139.433497537 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441666666667 0.580463131201 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2372422844 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469020660206 0.242375264174 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182748973084 0.0925447433944 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154854512882 0.071462118173 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317560332468 0.151781067708 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113654002756 0.0609392437508 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.32886699507 86% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.