TPO 40 integrated
The passage and the lecture discuss human presence on venus. The author of the passage present three reasons to demonstrate that human could not be survived in venus harsh condition. However, the lecturer believes none of the reasons could strongly refute human presence on venus.
The author argues that the atmospheric pressure at venus is much higher than the pressure at our home. therefore any landed spacecraft on there have been destroyed. The lecturer argues against this reason and believes that a station can establish 50 kilometers above venus surface, which pressure is equal to earth's pressure. As a result, higher pressure cannot be a restrictive factor for human life on venus.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the view that no water's storage and oxygen existence on venus surface. this indicates that these must be supplied from earth to venus. Nevertheless, the author illustrates that these vital elements can be compound of atmospheric components, which can find on venus atmosphere, like as carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid. Consequently, the absence of water and oxygen is not an obstacle to establishing a permanent station on venus.
Finally, the reading asserts that much more of sunlight is reflected back into space by the atmosphere or thick clouds layer. therefore human could not produce electricity of light. The lecturer opposes this point by explaining that in the established station could get light passed through the atmosphere and emitted by clouds. Accordingly light gets at the station to power machines and devices.
this claim which life is not possible on other planets like as venus does not possess a strong support in order to be acceptable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...h higher than the pressure at our home. therefore any landed spacecraft on there have bee...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...h higher than the pressure at our home. therefore any landed spacecraft on there have bee...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'earth'.
Suggestion: earth
...nus surface, which pressure is equal to earths pressure. As a result, higher pressure ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'waters'' or 'water's'?
Suggestion: waters'; water's
... reading passage holds the view that no waters storage and oxygen existence on venus s...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... and oxygen existence on venus surface. this indicates that these must be supplied f...
^^^^
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...y the atmosphere or thick clouds layer. therefore human could not produce electricity of ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 127, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...y the atmosphere or thick clouds layer. therefore human could not produce electricity of ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
...h the atmosphere and emitted by clouds. Accordingly light gets at the station to power mach...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ation to power machines and devices. this claim which life is not possible on oth...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 273.0 270.72406181 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30036630037 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69711514171 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.735481151 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468975683984 0.272083759551 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153933444667 0.0996497079465 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036398409725 0.0662205650399 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237898275429 0.162205337803 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741676674591 0.0443174109184 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 63.6247240618 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.