You recently saw a program on television you would like to comment on the same.
Write a letter to satellite channel in your letter.in your letter
-Introduce yourself and write the name of the program you are writing about.
-Give your comments on the content and quality of the program
-Give suggestions about the program
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to share my views on your recently launched television program which is broadcasted on every weekend.
My name is Navdeep Singh and is working as a content reviewer in a news house. I am watching your program "Satyamev Jayate" from it's inception on the Colours channel.
Your program is very popular among the people and is expected to grow exponentially, if the proper quality and content is maintained. During my observation, I have noticed that one episode was gender biased which will impact adversely to the society. Secondary language is rudimentary as well as not desirable for young children. Moreover, lead anchor is not able to understand local languages during the questionnaire from public.
However, there is a wide scope for improvement to make it more successful. Firstly different geographic regions of the country should be covered to bring variety and does diversity into the script. Additionally, host should be able to understand multiple languages.
I hope my suggestions will be valuable for you and waiting for your response.
Your sincerely
Navdeep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to share my vie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32960893855 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03471791304 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2329953735 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218134512128 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661636058095 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799039364867 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115952439964 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092950103012 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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