It is often said that government spends too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important. Do you agree or disagree?
countries in nowadays' world spents billions of dollor worth of revenue on wildlife perservation. As the athurities usually have other responsibiliteis, thus people usually regards them useing resource on the animal project not as much off importance. I think wildlife proetection over this kind of matter is valid as the animal protection have an enviromental benifit and also an economical benifit.
To begin with, the wildlife protection is perliminarily a main aspect within the enviromental protection innitiatives. this is widly regard as one of the main responsibility of modern goverment. The United nation Institution provide a guidline that countries have to consider not only its citicen wellbeing, but also the enviromental wellbeing of the nation. For example, the developing country such as Nigeria are establishing natural perservation zones to protect wildlife. The more developed nations such as Germen and Finland, even with their teritory been fully caltivated, still start up projects to help wild wolves and rindears to rehebilitate in their country. Those examples shows the responsibilites countries holds for protecting animals as part of enviroemntal protections.
Additionally, the nect fact about animal perservation is that the wildlife are importante source of economical gains. The wild life sarfary is a popular turist attractions and maintain a healthy animal population for this purpose is vital to the industry. For instance, Panda perservation project in China is become an national icon and a world famourse turist site taht can generate considerable revenue for the host area. The example also can be found from the Afican safary trips which attracts 30% of the annue visitors to the continente. thus, this meant the animal perservation economical benifit makes it a important aspect of goverment expenditure.
To conclude, the responsibility of goverement to perserve animal as part of enviromental protection scope requires the goverment to focus on this. Furthermore, the benifit for country turist industy stenthens the importance of animal protection. thus goverment should pull more resource into animal perservation projects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69325153374 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21457757359 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585889570552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3596174329 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.176470588 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0819918699189 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274632682374 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279994281219 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515602794867 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231648758293 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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