Write a letter to your neighbour because you have some problems about his car park.In your letter
-welcome him/her in your society
-explain your problem
give me some suggestions
Dear Nipun,
I am writing this letter to draw your kind attention towards the problem that is faced by me due to your car parking.
Firstly, I would like to congratulate you for shifting in the Beverly Hills. Moreover, we are delighted to have a neighbourer as we can spare our leisure time together going forward. In addition to this, my children are feeling joyful and enthusiastic to interact with your child.
As you know society has limited parking which is allocated on first come first serve basis. However, it's observed by me that your vehicle is being placed in wrong area from a week. While, it causing difficulty to me in parking mine four wheeler.
I'd like to suggest you that there is a free space available next to our main gate. Likewise, it's often used by most of the people to place their car. Similarly, security guard charges nominal monthly fee for safeguarding it. Secondly, few more parking in the basement will be available for allocation from next month. You can book one from them.
I look forward you for your coöperation.
Warm regards
Deep
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Nipun, I am writing this letter to draw your ki...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s faced by me due to your car parking. Firstly, I would like to congratulate yo...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... neighbourer as we can spare our leisure time together going forward. In addition...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...husiastic to interact with your child. As you know society has limited parking ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...iastic to interact with your child. As you know society has limited parking wh...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...being placed in wrong area from a week. While, it causing difficulty to me in parking...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty to me in parking mine four wheeler. Id like to suggest you that there is a f...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...to me in parking mine four wheeler. Id like to suggest you that there is a fre...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...look forward you for your coöperation. Warm regards Deep
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, while, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83422459893 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54203698137 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711229946524 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5894527541 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5714285714 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 4.34317383033 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271076699236 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754382217125 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835324048072 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166099523252 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991557768446 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.