four day work week
The lecture casts doubt on the arguments provided in the passage which is in favour of a 4 day work week. The lecturer challenges each of the argument presented in the passage with strong and thoughtful counter-arguments.
Firstly, the passage states that company would make more profit if employees are given four day work week option. However, the lecturer challenges the argument by giving his own set of arguments. He states that if companies hire more people, they would have to spend more. His critique is that more people would imply that the company spends more on training and the medical benefits that company gives to its employee. It would also mean that the company would need more office space and office setups such as computers for the work. This would put an additional burden on the company's balance sheet thereby hampering their overall profits.
Secondly, he also challenges the passage view on increased employment with four day work week. The passage says that for the company to get the work done they would have to hire more employees which would reduce the unemployment in the country. In contrast to this argument the lecturer says that if employees are hired for four day work week, the companies might start push them to their limits to do the same amount of work they did previously. That would imply that employees are exhausted more and no more jobs are created.
Thirdly, the passage says that a four day work week would give people an opportunity to improve their personal lives. They can spend more time with their family and on their personal interests during the rest of the week. However, that argument is also thrashed by the lecturer by giving the argument that four day work week can put them at risk and hamper their job stability since the companies would be willing to hire someone who wants to work five day a week for them. This can also hamper their promotion chances since the management is more likely to favour someone who is willing to work more for the company.
Due to all these counter-arguments the lecturer casts doubt on the proposal of four day work week.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...increased employment with four day work week. The passage says that for the company ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...f employees are hired for four day work week, the companies might start push them to...
^^^^
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
... doubt on the proposal of four day work week.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 5.04856512141 317% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 366.0 270.72406181 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80601092896 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4362470422 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 145.348785872 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428961748634 0.540411800872 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8278323983 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.470588235 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389005544045 0.272083759551 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173763027696 0.0996497079465 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180805072208 0.0662205650399 273% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296170591044 0.162205337803 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115309159632 0.0443174109184 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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