do you agree or disagree with the following statement. leadership come in nature and one can't learn to be a leader?
Despite the continual argument in psychology nature vs. nurture, everyone admit that leadership come in nature.However the question is, can we learn to become a leader?Although some people believe it could happen, I would argue this leadership is in person’s blood and its not a metrial to learn or study.
To begin with, many statistic study proved that some children since 3 years old are leader in nature .Recently study have been taken place to evaluate children behavior in controlling other peers, give them orders, and have a strong impact to make others follow them.take my own experience as an example. My cousin Samira at same my age, she’s use to play with my games and I feel angry about this and keep complaining to my parents but when my parents try to ask her for sharing the toys, she refuse that by said I will broken them and she is more carefull in playing than me asking my parents to leave me with her as she will take care of me. She confesed my parents and me this is true and she order me to follow her in playing when she give me permission to play and later I do follow her with happiness and actually I even start asking for her advice in whatever I want to do in my study, playing, and even in choosing my clothes.
In addition, many career need to be leader in making decision and as it natural in person we can fiend some people are successful than others in their work especially if they are running their own private buisniss .My husband is a good example of this.He have landscape company and there are five workers work with him. I remember he get a request for making person ‘s garden design and should be done in two weeks and his workers doing the work so slowly inspite his orders to workharderand he nwill reward them for extratime sallery to finish within the deadtime, they are not listen and keep work in slow mood. When my husband notice that after three days from start the work he hire one of his friend name Ali as manager for this project.the first day to Ali they finish about 305of work because he was so strict as well as respectful by the workers .They listen to every words he say and follow his order word by word and the project done two days earlier to its deadline because of Ali’s leadershipness.
In sum, although some many think leadership can be obtain by learning, I personally feel that leadership is in nature according to statistic study and success in work for some people who have this nature. I recommend for parents who have this nature in their children to keep encourage them to evocated it, and one day may be their child will be president for their country or leader for one important agencies or companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, i feel, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53578732106 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47941833394 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505112474438 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.1344086022 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.8100217125 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 221.8 100.406767564 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.9 20.6045352989 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183323493283 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838967047546 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478743689327 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128638034235 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050469432545 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 11.7677419355 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.68 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.6 10.1575268817 193% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.94 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.0537634409 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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