Look at the maps below showing how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007, and summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparison where relevant.
The two pictures illustrate various changes in the town of Harborne between 1936 and 2007.
It is clear this town underwent a complete transformation with new additions to it. The town saw considerable growth in the development of new inhabited area during the period. Moreover, post office, bank and library still remain unchanged, however, less trees, and there was several replacements which occurred with some buildings.
Having a detailed look at the maps, the river which are located in the north east of the town removed to make way for the residential area. In the south east of the town, the government officers and the farm land converted to a museum and a golf course and to the north west of post office, two trees was chopped-down. Furthermore, in the center of the town, the flower shop was replaced by a travel agent, the sweet shop and the butchers the supermarket were knocked down to give away for a supermarket.
However, the post office, bank and library which are located in the center of the town still remained over the period. Additionally, when it comes to the cycle path which was positioned to the south west of the flower shop had been straightened.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun trees is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ibrary still remain unchanged, however, less trees, and there was several replacemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, look, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73626586155 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546798029557 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6623396475 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.888888889 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10944069778 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527065581689 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063911763063 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856498534249 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745121543978 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.