The maps below show the cente of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for it is development.
Summarise the information by selectind and reporting yhe main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pictures below shows some information about small-scale town at that moment and plan for improving Islip.
First of all, at the map number one we can see main road, some shops, not big park and the educational facility is presented by school. It is contrasted by the map number two, where going to build large shopping centre, bus station and car park. although area of park would be sharply decrease.
Secondly, it is interesting to note, that main road would be allow to pedestrians only. Also around the town centre planning to pave the road for automobiles, which name Duel carriageway.
Thirdly, in the future would be more new housings, which locate first near the park and second at the side of shopping centres parking.
Based on this points we can get a information about plan of future developing tine town Islip.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pping centre, bus station and car park. although area of park would be sharply decrease....
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...oad would be allow to pedestrians only. Also around the town centre planning to pave...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...f shopping centres parking. Based on this points we can get a information about p...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52899848425 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3628526529 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185123293165 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795508553718 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819396850958 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110068757855 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890143544744 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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