the map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket
southern area (Bransdon and Cronsdon city) and also northern area (Hindon). This city also has two industrial area that are coming alongside on the its north and south part. In the middle of housing which cover this city, exist Town center with no traffic zone.
Regarding with the supermarket that will be built there, the stakeholders are considering two available option areas, that is S1 and S2. In observing the option 1, called S1, its location are far from the Town center and also two promised area with high-dense population, firstly, 29.000 the candidate customer from Cronsdon, 25 km in the east-southern area of Garlsdon city and also 16 km from Bransdon with 15.000 population in South-eastern of city. By contrast, this point has a most suitable people who want to shopping through the private and public transportations. The candidate from any place can enjoy their own car to reach this point.
Turning to the second option, called S2, located in middle of town center. It has a strategic position as a nearest point from the center of Gralsdon. The people from housing can achieve it by walking because there is no allowance for using the private transport option. This point is cross by the railway line which can be the one solution for the other place to achieve it comfortably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Southern
southern area Bransdon and Cronsdon city and als...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...trial area that are coming alongside on the its north and south part. In the middle of ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xist Town center with no traffic zone. Regarding with the supermarket that will...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... center. It has a strategic position as a nearest point from the center of Gralsd...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, regarding, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88687782805 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63123630955 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574660633484 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4261225127 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1818181818 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104567182916 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387505310442 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319855576234 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711842466875 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170829600016 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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