Lower Quality of Education
Nowadays, there is an opinion about the education quality of literacy and counting skills that become
weaken. Related to this issue, I think there are few causes that influence that condition. Moreover,
there also solutions related to it.
The first cause that makes people having a lower quality of literacy and numeracy is more people prefer
to do outdoor activities rather than read some formal literature. Recently, elementary student are
enjoying playing outside their classes such us playing football or just having a chit chat with their friends.
Spending their time in class by reading books or doing some calculating exercise become a boring
activities because they cannot interact with their friends. By this condition, school needs to encourage
their student to read more books by develop new teaching methods so their student can enjoy the in
class activities.
The development of online games industry also affects the habit of people in enjoying their leisure time.
Before, people read books as their hobby but recently more people playing games rather than reading a
book. Less or more, this changes impact to the people literacy skill. The solutions for this situation is the
government need to push the games industry to develop application or games that related to literature
or numeracy, so people can develop their skill event ought using a games.
So, the increasing of interesting outdoor activities and the changes of habit that how people spend their
leisure time affect to the declining educational quality of literacy and numerical skill. That’s why, school
need to develop new method of teaching and government need to develop games that related to
literacy and numeracy to solve the problems.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-09-12 | radikalyuda | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'games'' or 'game's'?
Suggestion: games'; game's
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...need to develop games that related to literacy and numeracy to solve the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41516245487 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49444638527 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509025270758 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9439923 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100198563277 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416429808647 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775906893757 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0361479305123 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811038297159 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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