car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. how true do you think this statement is?
Nowadays, more people have their own car than before. This has unpleasant impacts specially in large crowded cities. when everybody own a car, more population means more cars and therefor more traffic.
We use cars so we could reach our destination faster but instead we get stuck in traffic and arrive even later. So if people understand this consequences, they would be encouraged to use public transport like bus and subway instead.
Moreover, the more cars we use more fuel burns which will reduce our resources(such as fossil fuels) and increase the air pollution that affects our health.
Large number of cars in the street also adds to the sound pollution with all the honking and screaming in different situations.
The important question is what governments can do to solve these problems. First of all, people should be educated to understand the negative effect of heavy traffics on mental and physical well-being of others, environment and time management and try to avoid it.
Then, governments need to show them alternative ways to get where they need to be efficiently. They should improve public transportation by making it faster and safer so people would be encouraged to use them. Also, bicycles are a good replacement specially in shorter distances. Extending and improving bike roads and adding some traffic laws to create a safer domain for riders will interest people in cycling.
More importantly, we shouldn't forget the importance of teaching the next generation. If our children learn about the disadvantages of uncontrolled car usage and heavy traffics and its possible replacement the future maybe free of this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, in short, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1797752809 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81857540146 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63670411985 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6584651838 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107894755301 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355505653925 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246456132497 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051582009967 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223827779559 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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