Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing. In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. disadvantages?
The modern technology that our society gas access to today could give authorities the ability to be aware of what we do or the things that we say to each other. For instance, they could listen to our conversations on phone or track our location. The necessity of these actions and how it affects people is something that needs to be analysis.
The concerns around safety might have lead some people to sense that government needs to monitor civilians. For example, if they receive some information through this monitoring showing that someone is planing to commit a crime, they would be able to stop them before the person hurts anyone, physically and financially, or at least minimize the damage. But I don't think this justifies the invasion of privacy that this system is based on.
Monitoring people, checking where they go and eavesdropping on their private conversations are direct attack to their personal space which is a basic human right. Plus, the fact that they are gonna do it without their knowledge or permission breaks several laws.
In my opinion, spying on normal people is extremely unethical and wrong in many levels. In some cases that they really suspect that someone is about to do something or an individual who has a long history of criminal records and is suspected to do it again it might be neccessary within reason. But beyond that I believe it is nit acceptable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 360, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... or at least minimize the damage. But I dont think this justifies the invasion of pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, at least, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83682008368 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63745724878 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627615062762 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3697590739 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.090909091 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211802495513 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683960623248 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522684930567 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109380741442 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052831336659 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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