The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparision where relavant.
The graph illustrates the difference between the amount of the electricity produced and used by people in ten countries in 2014.
These ten nations can be grouped into two categories as China and United States placed in one group and the rest is on the other side. The two former countries appeared to be the greatest producers and consumers due to 5, 398 billion kWh generated and 5,322 billion kWh used in China; and 4,099 billion kWh produced and 3,866 billion kWh used in the U.S.
The figures dropped dramatically when it came to other 8 countries. While the data remained approximately among these, 1,057 billion kWh for Russia in the third place and 485,1 for Korea at the bottom, there is a big gap comparing to China and the U.S. The amount of electricity produced and used in China which was in the first place were ten times of those in Korea.
- Some people say History is one of the most important subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than history.Discuss both view and give your opinions. 78
- The bar chart shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparision where relavant. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, third, while, in the first place, in the third place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62745098039 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4672834694 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1035931004 43.030603864 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.0 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.25 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.75 5.23603664747 301% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083970683501 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644652405698 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052065224635 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079406836889 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503486299609 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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