Young people enjoy life more than old people do.

Essay topics:

Young people enjoy life more than old people do.

Generally young people have curiosity and excitement about their life than the older people have. Young people want to do everything in their life and enjoy in that But the older people just stick to one thing and continue with that.
Firstly, the young people have more energy than the older people. They does not want to miss any single moment in their life. It does not mean that the young people do not care about their life. They care their life but not much as older people do. Foe example, my friend who have interest in basket ball and he play basket ball everyday. he enjoy playing that game and does not miss even a single day. Also he is a topper of his college even by playing game everyday.
The older people does not have much dreams or goals to achieve. They just focus on their current job. But the young people have a lot of dreams and goals to achieve from their childhood. For example, a school girl who have a goal to enter a best college and she also wants to go abroad for her higher studies. To achieve that goal, she did a very hard work by taking extra classes from professors and joined in a coaching center. By doing this much hard work at last she got success in getting seat into a best college and went to abroad for higher studies.
Therefore, the younger people enjoy their life by achieving their dreams than the older people do.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... enjoy in that But the older people just stick to one thing and continue with tha...
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...k to one thing and continue with that. Firstly, the young people have more ener...
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Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
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...more energy than the older people. They does not want to miss any single moment in t...
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Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'plays'.
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...who have interest in basket ball and he play basket ball everyday. he enjoy playing ...
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Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
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... in basket ball and he play basket ball everyday. he enjoy playing that game and does no...
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... ball and he play basket ball everyday. he enjoy playing that game and does not mi...
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Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
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...me and does not miss even a single day. Also he is a topper of his college even by p...
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...college even by playing game everyday. The older people does not have much drea...
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... The older people does not have much dreams or goals to achieve. They just f...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... a school girl who have a goal to enter a best college and she also wants to go a...
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...st she got success in getting seat into a best college and went to abroad for hig...
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...and went to abroad for higher studies. Therefore, the younger people enjoy thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37795275591 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94421232378 2.67179642975 73% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472440944882 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7955481585 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39948434786 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161240769763 0.076458572812 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160465506568 0.0737576698707 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324985295631 0.150856017488 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146968874061 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.25 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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