You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mr James,
my name is Susan Patrick and I just moved into the vacate apartment on the first floor of this building and I am writing to inform you we would be holding a party overnight on Saturday to celebrate my husband fifty birthday anniversary.
we are hoping to host about forty guest, it will be a buffet beach party and each guest will to come with a gift for the celebrant as well as their swimming truck, this is to show love and add more spice to the occasion. we will also be inviting a health expert who will be educating us on the importance of healthy living.
Kindly accept this as a formal invitation for you and your wife, we will appreciate if you can honour us with your presence at the occasion. this will avail us the opportunity to know each other more and bond as neighbours.
hoping to hearing from you soon.
Kate
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr James, my name is Susan Patrick and I just move...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... is Susan Patrick and I just moved into the vacate apartment on the first floor of this bu...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my husband fifty birthday anniversary. we are hoping to host about forty guest,...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...usband fifty birthday anniversary. we are hoping to host about forty guest, i...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a buffet beach party and each guest will to come with a gift for the celebrant as...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with a gift for the celebrant as well as their swimming truck, this is to show lo...
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Suggestion: We
...ve and add more spice to the occasion. we will also be inviting a health expert w...
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Suggestion: This
... us with your presence at the occasion. this will avail us the opportunity to know e...
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Suggestion: Hoping
...ch other more and bond as neighbours. hoping to hearing from you soon. Kate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41772151899 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3832454756 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.1515621512 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 16.8248392259 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14363572868 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072290150924 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868279954459 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089217368377 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614187864422 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.