Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Discuss and give your opinion.
One of the most controversial issues today related to the investment of government. While there are some benefits in spending money on public services, I still believe that investing tax-payers’ money in the arts is virtually reasonable.
It is undoubtable for some argue that public services should be allocated a significant amount of government budget. To start with, public services are vital things such as schools, hospitals, public transportation systems or other services which are considered as the standards of life quality of a certain country’s citizens. Moreover, it is widely accepted that if governments do not expend money on these services, the poor or the people who are low status will be affected more because they are the ones depending on such services. Especially, people’s knowledge and health are the key of a fortune country, that why public services for people need to be one of the government’s priorities.
By contrast, I have a strong belief that governments are not squandering tax-payers’ money when the arts are invested from their budget. This is mainly due to the fact that the arts affect positively to spiritual life of people. Besides, some types of arts such as traditional music or dances are the spectacular characteristics of a nation that attract tourists and bring profit to the country. Furthermore, some theatre and museum of arts may have to close without the financial assistance of governments, therefore people who love the arts and the culture of their country may be affected.
In conclusion, there are clear benefits in expanding a huge amount of government budget on public service. But investing in the arts is not a waste of money due to its positive influences on people and countries that were analyzed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2214532872 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17600693181 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550173010381 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6728511143 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274138151848 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10221520738 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549147616826 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175895175844 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376385143951 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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