Education for young people is important in many countries. However, the others think governments should spend money on education in the adult population who can not read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many people give much more focus on how governments allocate money for education. While many people consider this should be invested in adult illiterate people, I strongly believe that educating young people is more significant.
On one hand, there are a variety of reasons why the people who are young should receive the investment. One reason is that the future of a certain country relies on the quality of young people. Being educated well will enable them to continue building their civilization. Furthermore, the learning capacity of children is more active than adults, hence it is easier to acquire knowledge when people are still young. If they’re received a full education system, the sooner the better, they will have conditions to develop all of their knowledge and skills.
On the other hand, creating an education system for adult people who are illiterate is not easy to realize because the time that is ready for studying of them is limited and on overtime. After a hard-working day, people tend to spend their time on their families rather than studying. In addition, they can make their lives through manual labor jobs which depend on only their skills without reading and writing. It will be difficult to persuade illiterate people if they’re having jobs bringing to them stable lives because obtaining knowledge might not their basic necessities.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that illiteracy in adult people still need to be eliminated, but this is by no means the key consideration of governments. I believe that children should be invested in education because of the above points.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 567, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...use obtaining knowledge might not their basic necessities. In conclusion, it is certainly true...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17669172932 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73580135958 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8124306167 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238865014847 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873906002246 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601390942648 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151242119699 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558297194886 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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