Neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.

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Neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.

Dear Simon,

hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter in response to your complaint letter you sent me yesterday about the noise from my flat. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused to you and would like to explain myself, humbly ask for you forgiveness.

this is mainly because of our upcoming wedding anniversary preparations so we had decided to hire a firm to renovate our house in the short period. Hence, they had to bring heavy machinery to complete. this could be the reason you might have heard abnormal noise from our flat. we were unaware of the fact that the sound would reach your house. I already instructed them to reduce the noise level so it should calm down now. I hope this measure would appease you. By the way, the work would be complete by tomorrow.

Once again, I am extremely sorry for any annoyance caused by my action. I hope you would accept my apology. Thanks for
your patience on this matter. Please come by tomorrow evening so that I take you around my freshly revamped flat.

Yours lovingly, Tom<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre=""></span>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: We
...ave heard abnormal noise from our flat. we were unaware of the fact that the sound...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96825396825 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50732595419 2.54303337028 138% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2024153683 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 4.34317383033 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238468529404 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722238338878 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756339563186 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115815378278 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078440077115 0.0580467560999 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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