Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
-explain the reasons for the noise
-apologies
-describe what action you will take
Hello Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regard to the complain letter that you have sent to me.
At the beginning I would like to humbly apologize for the inconvenience due to the situations that occurred.
Last weekend, me and my wife were testing new smoke detector in our apartment, and I assume that was the noise which interrupted your kids sleep. I can assure that this situation will not happen again. However, I suggest checking your fire alarm in apartment because, I have received email from our building management about some issues with the existing ones. Apparently, they may not work in case of fire. In attachment you may find the smoke detector instruction which may help you to do
self-test check.
However, I hope that this situation will not have bad impact on our friendship. One more time I really regret the event and request for forgiveness. Please accept this box of chocolates as my apologies.
Your sincerely,
Tomasz Zawadzki
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Sir or Madam, I am writing to you with regard to the c...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... I am writing to you with regard to the complain letter that you have sent to me. ...
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Line 13, column 491, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tor instruction which may help you to do self-test check. However, I hope that ...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Self-test
...instruction which may help you to do self-test check. However, I hope that this situ...
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Line 17, column 164, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... request for forgiveness. Please accept this box of chocolates as my apologies. ...
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Line 21, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es as my apologies. Your sincerely, Tomasz Zawadzki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, may, really, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99393939394 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66139975737 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678787878788 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7605490839 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9090909091 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24354844208 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737057574566 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609664395366 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928831549791 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079186952133 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.