The television is good for you.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of watching television.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Television is considered to be a good means of entertainment for all generations. It is also helpful in terms of education. However, having bad exposure to television can be detrimental. There are several benefits and limitations of watching television, which will now be discussed.
Firstly, television is a good source of time pass for elder people, who stay alone at home most of the time. Also, various educational programs are broadcasted on television that are quite helpful for children. Moreover, people get to know about the latest news of the world from different news channels. We can gain the knowledge of current affairs and any other topic from television.Furthermore, there are several local channels that air the programs related to the local events of the city.
Admittedly, many shows on TV contain a lot of violent and vicious content that can have a bad influence on people, especially on youth. Some reality shows, for instance crime patrol, give the scandalous and wicked picture of society. Many youngsters become aggressive and wild after watching such outrageous programs on TV and this can sometime encourage people in doing criminal activities.
To conclude, it is an absolute individual choice of people on what programs they should watch on television. If programs are chosen wisely, then television is a very useful device. Otherwise, it can have a negative impact on our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...irs and any other topic from television.Furthermore, there are several local channels that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21052631579 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08005927841 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.421932512 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8571428571 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17375807289 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054652920685 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044374307505 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983519691887 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494326033133 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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