Prison is the most common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. however, a more effective solution is to provide peope a better education. Do you agree or disagree??
It is widely acknowledged that crime has become a perennial issue that every countries face. Because of this, how to deter and curb crime is always a topic of interest. although imprisoning criminals has been a conventional way, many people believe that education would be a more viable solution. From my perspective, i completely agree with this view and the reasons are stated below.
It is understandable why some people think that prisons are not holistic method to reduce crime rates. the key rationale is that prison systems can make situation worse as convicts are mixed with others. The consequence is that they may learn other illegal actions, and this will not assure successful rehabilitation. in fact, the number of criminal re-offending after being released from prisons is very high in many countries. this is testament to the fact that prisons do not produce desired results.
In stead of that, the government should provide better educations to not only its citizens, especially teenagers, but also prisoners. Providing education and vocational training to inmates can assure a change in their heart and help them to find job after they are discharged from prisons. As a result, they will stabilize their lives and not reoffend. in addition, by well educating people, particularly, teenagers about law systems, they will know the consequences of unlawful acts, and will not commit crimes or be seduced to engage in criminal activities.
In conclusion, although prisons are still necessary to keep criminals from their victims, i am still of the opinion that education is a more viable solution and produce better results.
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also, but, may, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21509433962 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84529302836 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4195472008 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13501087283 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441756845636 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289836830334 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824157840846 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021105084797 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.