A walk in the park
Sue was going for her morning walk when something unusual happened. A dog was crossing the road. Unfortunately, it collided with her. She slipped and fell backward and banged her elbow on the ground. She started to feel dizzy and then she fainted. She was not conscious for a minute or so. When she came around, her arm was very painful. It was quite swollen and bruised, but it was not bleeding. She realized it was a serious injury, so she went to a hospital. At the hospital, a doctor is concerned about her. He sent her to see a consultant. She had to make some medical examinations of her head immediately. Based on these examinations, the consultant decided she was only slightly damaged skin. Then, she has bandaged her wounds. The doctor also prescribed some medicines for her. After that, she returned home.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ted to feel dizzy and then she fainted. She was not conscious for a minute or so. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 1615.20841683 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 144.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67361111111 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68180562389 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659722222222 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 20.2975951904 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.1224561947 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 42.0625 106.682146367 39% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.0 20.7667163134 43% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.1875 7.06120827912 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0215169069405 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00795368668811 0.084324248473 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030804496084 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0215169069405 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 13.0946893788 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.26 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 11.3001002004 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.03 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 9.78957915832 36% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.1190380762 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 10.7795591182 37% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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