In some nations, many more people decide to live alone nowadays than in the old days. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
In some nations, many more people decide to live alone nowadays than in the old days. In my opinion, i both agree and disagree with this point of view.
On one hand, living alone encourage people to stand on their own feet and become more independent. Beside, this life style can help increase many life skills such as: cooking, cleaning, time management,.... Therefore, living by your self can be challenging, but more than that, it can be more comforting, private and free than living with others. In term of economic, the fact that many people choose to live alone can help real estate industry and the construction industry develop better.
On the other hand, people in that way of living might be completely alone. Sometimes, some people like being alone in their life, but actually being alone is not that easy for anyone. In addition, people who live alone feel bored most of the time and it is the worst feeling of staying alone in one place. Moreover, this living style can be unsafe, especially for a girl, so people need to be sure of safety in that particular place, lack of safety can create greater issues. When people choose to live alone, it is mean that having no one to take care of them even when they are sick or when furniture in the house is broken, people will have to fix it without help of anyone. Last but not least, this life style will lead to economic burden including: rent, parking fee, electricity and water bills,....
In conclusion, living alone has both advantages and disadvantages which are effect on individuals and society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71897810219 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43201831628 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3433657864 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328657968858 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137062320468 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171166844081 0.0667982634062 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248976456199 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.188717503071 0.056905535591 332% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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